TUM

I started to write a poem ( Kavita ) for my dear one.

Let me know about my first attempt to write a poem in Hindi. Your suggestions are welcome for motivation.

Registan Ki tpti dhoop me thndi chanv ka ahsas si lgti tum,

Bhtke smndr me kinara lgane vali kshti si lgti tum,

Ucche aasman me timtimate tare si lgti tum,

Badlo se brse pani ki phli fuhar si lgti tum,

Gulista ke ghne drkhto ki hriyali si lgti tum,

Thnd me grmi ka ahsas si lgti tum,

Andhere me ummid ki roshni ka ahsas si lgti tum,

Chmn ke phulo ki tbssum si lgti tum,

Driya ke bhte pani ki kl-kl ki aavaj si lgti tum,

Pahado pe Uncche jhrno ke trnnum si lgti tum,

Mujhe mere hi hone ka ahsas si krati tum,

Mere khud ka 'Anu' ke ho jane ki khvaish puri si krati tum.